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Void and Vitality (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Oh, when the Sun has sunken steep
This shapeless chaos
Finds me deep
I shall be long with what I know
When all of time has made me slow
For Fury's scorn now holds me tight
Sears my will
Dispels my sight
And craving light, my blinded eyes
Turn fast to Love's deceitful cries
Catching word like hooks and rings
All I've wondered
Lips do bring
Blazing darkness, bows to mourning
Heed's not fair and subtle warning
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10253
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2005 11:08 AM PDT
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