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Void and Vitality (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Oh, when the Sun has sunken steep This shapeless chaos Finds me deep I shall be long with what I know When all of time has made me slow For Fury's scorn now holds me tight Sears my will Dispels my sight And craving light, my blinded eyes Turn fast to Love's deceitful cries Catching word like hooks and rings All I've wondered Lips do bring Blazing darkness, bows to mourning Heed's not fair and subtle warning

Up the ladder: Untitled
Down the ladder: Downside

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10240
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2005 11:08 AM PDT
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[n/a] Joi @ 207.119.185.153 | 26-Aug-07/11:08 PM | Reply
I liked the deepness of this.
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