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The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree (Haiku) by horus8 The wheel of fifths stiffs
me again, as your climax
keeps the slow burn ward
I was just nothing
but your book collector then.
So, still am i now
I love you alone.
Keeping our secret letters
Sagittarius.
To be under you
for all of that which is not.
Eternally yours
Up the ladder:
Down Again
Down the ladder:
Handy Smurf
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.263158
Posted: September 24, 2002 1:07 PM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2002 1:07 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.2032514 Overall Rank: 980 Comments:
Truly evil are the mechanisms of repression in church and society, which do not see the shadow in themselves. So says Baphomet 1st in 7. 7/10
in another life I think I was your bathroom mirror...a little dirty but looking at you straight in the eye...telling you (me) something (someone) was waiting...as close as the front door. Ready to either step in - or out. But never to be forgotten. Its these memories (dividing lines) between the face in the mirror and the lingering presence of those passing before (or behind) that quickly flash (distract) before our eyes. In the bathroom's slightly tinted yellow light look back at yourself and let it look a little longer before you step out to see who might be knocking....next in line.
Baffled by Royalflesh's comment, but thinking this poem is great
Sleep shall neither night nor day
hang upon his penthouse lid; he shall live a man forbid. iknow
Here is my attempt to track down your crappy poems and make a comment, which I have avoided at all costs in the past. Well, you have Intransit, who would give a pile of shit a 10 loving this and Athena, the plagiarist (or is it you) digging it, and Christof (the best poet on this site) well he was dazed and thinking of New Zealand, because it is shit. Just like all the other poem you write.
Athena is a girl i know that use to stay in my guest house. as for her poetry, that's her problem..well i can tell you this thief or not she moves in more challenging spheres than you, but i fear you have her plowed in the poetry area, but that's not saying alot. is it. Christof bet poet here? i would argue that there are better, see that's the problem with being #1..all sunday drives come to an end..enjoy your time here..glad you enjoyed the opera..here's a moist towelette you missed a little chunk on your cheek there..all clean.scoot along now.LMAO.r
Sweet dear: a plagiarist is a plagiarist. And the fact that you know her and in some way justify her actions is scary. It is the ultimate form of scum to steal another's work. But maybe you call it visionary. Is Athena the 22-year-old bitch that bore your child and works the turkey roil to pay the preschool? Hahahahahahah, Stan Rice. You idiot of all idiots. christtof (and I will let the poor chap defend himself, although I suspect him too modest) could write circles around you and your minions. hahahahahahaha. Stan Rice.
Challenging spheres? Is that a Holly wood thing? Come on fuck face. You don't even know me. At least I do not steal T.S. Elliot's most famous poem and claim it as my own. hahahahahah. What a dick you are. But is is all visionary, right dick head?
"I love you alone." thats great, i like that...6
again,this is senryu not haiku
Not bad, needs a message? Ya think?
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