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Haiku № 16947

The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree

by horus8

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Sep 2002 · 14 comments

The wheel of fifths stiffs me again, as your climax keeps the slow burn ward I was just nothing but your book collector then. So, still am i now I love you alone. Keeping our secret letters Sagittarius. To be under you for all of that which is not. Eternally yours

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[8] INTRANSIT 24-Sep-02/1:31 PM Reply
I smell an affair, but I don't understand the mechanics of Haiku.8 Can someone break Haiku down for me?I'd like to try one on for size.
[n/a] horus8 › INTRANSIT 24-Sep-02/1:40 PM Reply
past relationship actually...look it up (haiku, not that i'd know, it's pretty simple really...mechanics? fuck that..patterns are made to be broken to bits and bits and bits...i enjoy your work, glad to have you aboard...the life boats all have holes..have a nice trip..
[8] INTRANSIT › horus8 24-Sep-02/4:19 PM Reply
I don't know if I'm gonna get more from the poetry side of this forum, or the humor side. But I definitely agree with the patterns statement. RULES!?? WE DON'T NEED NO STINKING RULES!!!!
HAIKUUUUUUS AWAY!!!!
[7] Lenore 24-Sep-02/9:26 PM Reply
Truly evil are the mechanisms of repression in church and society, which do not see the shadow in themselves. So says Baphomet 1st in 7. 7/10
[7] royalflesh 24-Sep-02/10:45 PM Reply
in another life I think I was your bathroom mirror...a little dirty but looking at you straight in the eye...telling you (me) something (someone) was waiting...as close as the front door. Ready to either step in - or out. But never to be forgotten. Its these memories (dividing lines) between the face in the mirror and the lingering presence of those passing before (or behind) that quickly flash (distract) before our eyes. In the bathroom's slightly tinted yellow light look back at yourself and let it look a little longer before you step out to see who might be knocking....next in line.
[9] Christof 25-Sep-02/3:39 AM Reply
Baffled by Royalflesh's comment, but thinking this poem is great
[8] w~* ATHENA *~w 25-Sep-02/11:34 PM Reply
Sleep shall neither night nor day
hang upon his penthouse lid;
he shall live a man forbid.

iknow

[0] poetandknowit 17-Dec-02/1:05 AM Reply
Here is my attempt to track down your crappy poems and make a comment, which I have avoided at all costs in the past. Well, you have Intransit, who would give a pile of shit a 10 loving this and Athena, the plagiarist (or is it you) digging it, and Christof (the best poet on this site) well he was dazed and thinking of New Zealand, because it is shit. Just like all the other poem you write.

[n/a] Bachus › poetandknowit 17-Dec-02/1:26 AM Reply
Athena is a girl i know that use to stay in my guest house. as for her poetry, that's her problem..well i can tell you this thief or not she moves in more challenging spheres than you, but i fear you have her plowed in the poetry area, but that's not saying alot. is it. Christof bet poet here? i would argue that there are better, see that's the problem with being #1..all sunday drives come to an end..enjoy your time here..glad you enjoyed the opera..here's a moist towelette you missed a little chunk on your cheek there..all clean.scoot along now.LMAO.r
[0] poetandknowit › Bachus 17-Dec-02/1:35 AM Reply
Sweet dear: a plagiarist is a plagiarist. And the fact that you know her and in some way justify her actions is scary. It is the ultimate form of scum to steal another's work. But maybe you call it visionary. Is Athena the 22-year-old bitch that bore your child and works the turkey roil to pay the preschool? Hahahahahahah, Stan Rice. You idiot of all idiots. christtof (and I will let the poor chap defend himself, although I suspect him too modest) could write circles around you and your minions. hahahahahahaha. Stan Rice.
[0] poetandknowit › Bachus 17-Dec-02/1:38 AM Reply
Challenging spheres? Is that a Holly wood thing? Come on fuck face. You don't even know me. At least I do not steal T.S. Elliot's most famous poem and claim it as my own. hahahahahah. What a dick you are. But is is all visionary, right dick head?
[6] rockinindividual 25-Jan-03/1:33 PM Reply
"I love you alone." thats great, i like that...6
[5] dancin_n_da_moonlite 9-Apr-05/9:44 AM Reply
again,this is senryu not haiku
[n/a] Joi 26-Aug-07/11:12 PM Reply
Not bad, needs a message? Ya think?