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Prometheus sang for vultures (Haiku) by horus8 I gave you my fire,
and look what you did with it.
Love is for the birds.
Up the ladder:
waking up to fucking reality
Down the ladder:
Tide
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Posted: March 5, 2003 11:57 AM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 11:57 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.537065 Overall Rank: 660 Comments:
yes:
dodos. hawks. pigeons. no: peacocks. chickens. dinosaurs.
Hmmm... I wrote something simular in a poem not too long ago.
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j Yours is short, sweet (or bitter rather), and to point. 7.
i like this sort of thing. paranoid, evasive and bitter. 8
the idea of the titan singing as his liver is being eaten out amuses me...i think it was an eagle tho ;)
but anyways i like it good job
It was these huge vultures that live in the straits of Gibralter actually, quite rare, do you know of these birds. Famous in Greek literature, consistantly.
Yes we are very sad today, thanks Durt.
huh?
The are called Griffon vultures appropriately enough Durt.
Oh quite lovely.
uh huh
Short and to the point. Not suttle enough. Tone it down and add to it.
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