on I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
26 Aug 2006, 4:41 PM
Why not slit your throat and call it justice?
on Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus
26 Aug 2006, 4:40 PM
Enchanting
on sitting at the cliff's edge by nentwined
26 Aug 2006, 4:40 PM
lovely
replying on The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!
24 Aug 2006, 4:17 PM
I gave it 10/10 before. Now I realise you are demented. SO: 0/10
replying on The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus!
24 Aug 2006, 4:16 PM
I've revised my thinking: 0/10
on A prayer about Jesus by Sing4Jesus!
24 Aug 2006, 4:15 PM
You are fucking mad.
on Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins
24 Aug 2006, 4:11 PM
I love shoving stools 8" up a boy's ass.
replying on A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove
24 Aug 2006, 4:09 PM
Come on, baby, give it a 10! You know you want to. I'll reciprocate...indeed I'll do so now on account!
on The Tale Of Marietta And The Hornbag Priest (v.1) by Edna Sweetlove
24 Aug 2006, 8:16 AM
I'll start this off by giving it a 10 myself. I am my own harshest critic and I think this is the minimum it deserves. Everyone else, please be more generous.
on The Christian Soldier by Sing4Jesus!
23 Aug 2006, 3:28 PM
Fabulous! Utter shit!
on The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus!
23 Aug 2006, 3:28 PM
Fucking hilarious! Give it a 0/10 for talent, 10/10 for satire. The problem is: which? For the moment 5/10 and I'll make my mind up later.
on the servers' reaction to gypsies by ~incarnate~
20 Aug 2006, 5:22 AM
Quite interesting but spoiled by using dud grammar/slang occasionally (eg "close minded") and an abence of punctuation.
on Over beast by Crakyamuni
20 Aug 2006, 5:20 AM
You have some potential for writing but carelessness is not your best friend.
on 6 bloody mary's/2 cups of Rossi by Crakyamuni
20 Aug 2006, 5:19 AM
Deliciously illiterate and incompetent. I have read better things on toilet walls.
on My Pet Gerbil by Engelbert Humpalot
20 Aug 2006, 5:14 AM
I have always found a large plastic bag is sufficient to keep small rodents still during sodomy. Lovely poem, keep 'em rolling. Let's roll, in fact.
on The Lady by -=??lilaznjen??=-
17 Aug 2006, 4:18 PM
Genius.
on Untitled (a draft) by rnuk
17 Aug 2006, 4:13 PM
Your best one so far. I liked "shoulderless shrug".
PS you accidentally did a typo in "penultimate".
PS you accidentally did a typo in "penultimate".
on Me 2, Nature 0 by rnuk
17 Aug 2006, 4:11 PM
Surely the penultimate line should be
the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.
the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.
replying on A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove
17 Aug 2006, 3:30 AM
Why don't you slither off under your stone?