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Me 2, Nature 0

Member since 2006 · Posted 14 Aug 2006 · 3 comments

On my way to work I ran over a pheasant. BAM right under the front wheel. They think fast, do those pheasants. In a split second the other one stood next to it had thrown itself under my back wheel. That's love for you.

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[5] Edna Sweetlove 17-Aug-06/4:11 PM Reply

Surely the penultimate line should be

the other one STANDING next to it

???

And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.

[n/a] rnuk › Edna Sweetlove 20-Aug-06/3:54 PM Reply

Apologies for the appalling grammar, terrible northern dialect I have yet to shake.

[6] amanda_dcosta 22-Aug-06/6:49 AM Reply

I wouldn't say that this was very impressive although you were trying to get a point across.