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Me 2, Nature 0 (Free verse) by rnuk On my way to work
I ran over a pheasant.
BAM
right under the front wheel.
They think fast,
do those pheasants.
In a split second
the other one stood next to it
had thrown itself under my back wheel.
That's love for you.
Up the ladder:
Farewell
Down the ladder:
Stand Up For Yourself !!!
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Posted: August 14, 2006 2:44 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2006 2:44 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.880797 Overall Rank: 10160 Comments:
I wouldn't say that this was very impressive although you were trying to get a point across.
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the other one STANDING next to it
???
And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.