Poemranker [Poem: Me 2, Nature 0] [by rnuk] Thu Nov 21 11:57:54 PST 2024

Me 2, Nature 0 (Free verse) by rnuk

On my way to work I ran over a pheasant. BAM right under the front wheel. They think fast, do those pheasants. In a split second the other one stood next to it had thrown itself under my back wheel. That's love for you.

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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10167

Posted: August 14, 2006 2:44 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2006 2:44 PM PDT
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Comments:

[5] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.227.59 | 17-Aug-06/4:11 PM | Reply

Surely the penultimate line should be

the other one STANDING next to it

???

And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.

[n/a] rnuk @ 86.137.229.192 > Edna Sweetlove | 20-Aug-06/3:54 PM | Reply

Apologies for the appalling grammar, terrible northern dialect I have yet to shake.

[6] amanda_dcosta @ 202.164.140.158 | 22-Aug-06/6:49 AM | Reply

I wouldn't say that this was very impressive although you were trying to get a point across.

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