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Me 2, Nature 0 (Free verse) by rnuk

On my way to work I ran over a pheasant. BAM right under the front wheel. They think fast, do those pheasants. In a split second the other one stood next to it had thrown itself under my back wheel. That's love for you.

Edna Sweetlove 17-Aug-06/4:11 PM
Surely the penultimate line should be

the other one STANDING next to it

???

And it's not love. Or poetry. Still 5/10 for gaiety.




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