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Over beast (Free verse) by Crakyamuni Incandecent silence looms over the situation like
silocone waste and life all over your face
Cherish these moments because they hate you
hate these moments because they make you
take stock in overtalk-overchild
live free be wild
It might take your whole life to emulate that smile
again...
It might take your life whole in the end.
Up the ladder:
Nuisance
Down the ladder:
searching
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Posted: February 3, 2003 11:57 AM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2003 11:57 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.786667 Overall Rank: 11261 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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3-Feb-03/1:56 PM
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It might take your whole life to learn how to spell silicone, idiot.
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Crakyamuni @ 140.211.113.85
> horus8
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23-Jun-03/9:53 AM
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I like your degenerate,illuminati approach, for every toilet bowl, my enemy, needs a roach.
excellent stuff
Talent no doubt.
Fuck you're everywhere like my pubic hair. word. drow.
very young sounding
Thanks.
I really like this poem, it makes tons of sense to me... And, let's look beyond the spelling of silicone...
Thanks friend. I hope to one day learn the shape of words. A beautiful gesture to overlook my oversight. ANgst is often here overdone.
sounds like one on eminem's lost rap song....
This poem made me cum.
Great! The first line lures you in. There's just something about this that's all-consuming. A life's lesson here summed up in a few lines.
You have some potential for writing but carelessness is not your best friend.
Ok. Can you be my coach. I need a coach. A british coach with big words and an in depth view of the inner workings of Narnia or Harry Potter. Really.
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