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Over beast (Free verse) by Crakyamuni

Incandecent silence looms over the situation like silocone waste and life all over your face Cherish these moments because they hate you hate these moments because they make you take stock in overtalk-overchild live free be wild It might take your whole life to emulate that smile again... It might take your life whole in the end.

Edna Sweetlove 20-Aug-06/5:20 AM
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