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The Lady (Free verse) by -=??lilaznjen??=- There is the lady
She is at an altar
She is getting married
With a man named Walter.
Up the ladder:
sick and demented
Down the ladder:
scotty dog
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Posted: July 8, 2002 2:03 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 2:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.4035554 Overall Rank: 13609 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.222.223.239
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13-Jul-02/6:21 PM
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When I read this I sneezed towards the end, and in the confusion thought it said "With a naked man named Walter". This would have been quite amusing. However, as I regained my senses I was disappointed. Also, I wonder why you chose 'With' and not 'To' - is Walter not the lady's bridegroom, but merely someone who has accompanied her to the wedding?
No kidding. Well in that case.
There is the man. He is at an satanic alter. He is getting kinky. With a man named "poetry that leads to divorce". Beware Lady
Genius.
When I said "genius", I made a typo. I meant "shit".
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