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The Lady (Free verse) by -=??lilaznjen??=-
There is the lady She is at an altar She is getting married With a man named Walter.

Up the ladder: sick and demented
Down the ladder: scotty dog

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.1875
Weighted score: 3.4035554
Overall Rank: 13554
Posted: July 8, 2002 2:03 PM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2002 2:03 PM PDT
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[2] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 194.222.223.239 | 13-Jul-02/6:21 PM | Reply
When I read this I sneezed towards the end, and in the confusion thought it said "With a naked man named Walter". This would have been quite amusing. However, as I regained my senses I was disappointed. Also, I wonder why you chose 'With' and not 'To' - is Walter not the lady's bridegroom, but merely someone who has accompanied her to the wedding?
[2] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 3-Aug-02/11:29 PM | Reply
No kidding. Well in that case.
There is the man. He is at an satanic alter. He is getting kinky. With a man named "poetry that leads to divorce". Beware Lady
[5] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.227.59 | 17-Aug-06/4:18 PM | Reply
Genius.
[5] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.206.129 > Edna Sweetlove | 29-Aug-06/7:44 AM | Reply
When I said "genius", I made a typo. I meant "shit".
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