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The Lady (Free verse) by -=??lilaznjen??=-

There is the lady She is at an altar She is getting married With a man named Walter.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Jul-02/6:21 PM
When I read this I sneezed towards the end, and in the confusion thought it said "With a naked man named Walter". This would have been quite amusing. However, as I regained my senses I was disappointed. Also, I wonder why you chose 'With' and not 'To' - is Walter not the lady's bridegroom, but merely someone who has accompanied her to the wedding?




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