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The Christian Soldier

by Sing4Jesus!

Member since 2006 · Posted 23 Aug 2006 · 10 comments

Only God has control of his heart and mind He never stops praying, as it is good for his soul Finding Jesus Christ was his true Salvation Indescribable feelings of love for the Lord above He reads the Bible and writes spiritual poetry Energizes others with his devotion to God And encouraging them to pray on the bloody battlefield 4 love of his country he joined the U.S.Army The bravest band of men in the whole wide world He jokes around with a delightful sense of humor He encourages others to come tro the Lord through his life story Sweet and caring he truly makes God smile benignly Blessing him and giving him His protection In the face of evil and terrorism against our country Unselfish always giving of himself to others Serenity surrounds him because of God's love Fighting for the Lord in his nice new uniform.

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10 comments

[4] Dovina 23-Aug-06/3:18 PM Reply
it sounds so cliche that I wonder if it's satire. Either way, there is too much redundancy. For example,"He jokes around with a delightful sense of humor" simply means "He jokes." Most of the lines are like this.
[n/a] Sing4Jesus! › Dovina 24-Aug-06/9:20 AM Reply
fuck off.
[0] Edna Sweetlove › Dovina 23-Sep-06/7:23 PM Reply
You sound pretty dim.
[0] Edna Sweetlove 23-Aug-06/3:28 PM Reply
Fabulous! Utter shit!
[n/a] Sing4Jesus! › Edna Sweetlove 24-Aug-06/9:20 AM Reply
fuck off.
[0] Edna Sweetlove › Edna Sweetlove 24-Aug-06/4:17 PM Reply
I gave it 10/10 before. Now I realise you are demented. SO: 0/10
[0] Engelbert Humpalot 4-Sep-06/10:05 AM Reply
Hilariously bad.
[0] Engelbert Humpalot 4-Sep-06/10:05 AM Reply
Awful
[0] wDaphnew 8-Jan-12/8:25 AM Reply
I pissed myself with laughter. Please join my website so we can laugh at your worthless tripe. http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com - come on and join, you cunt.
[0] Big Cock Charlie 8-Feb-21/8:50 AM Reply
Appalling.