| Re: Hit & Run by horus8 |
10-Oct-02/5:29 AM |
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| Re: Daywalker by Blade |
10-Oct-02/5:30 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Oct-02/5:30 AM |
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How insightful. Except: it's not.
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| Re: Ode to Nicholas Jones by lukehanney |
10-Oct-02/5:32 AM |
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lukehanny, you are the win.
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| Re: Safe Distance, 10-10-02 by Frass |
10-Oct-02/7:59 PM |
Wow!! I didn't know the best way to express vague righteous anger was to write adolescent poetry and amateur psychoanalysis! "A well brimming with self-pity". Are you sure you wrote that? I could've sworn my 14-year-old sister won some sort of poetry contest for that the other day. More to the point, how is it you have such expert knowledge of the sniper's motivation? You seem to forget that not everyone in the world is such a beautiful tortured soul as you.
Let me get this straight: a) the sniper think's he's safe, b) the sniper knows he isn't safe, c) killing people from a distance is cowardly (as opposed to gutting them on a street corner, which is extraordinarily brave)? Well strike me down if you don't win the Pseudo-Insightful BS Award 2002! Congrats!! 10!!!
P.S. I hate to tell you this, but justice is what allegedly happens to people *after* they're found.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Oct-02/10:30 AM |
When two people are in a room together
And one of them breaks wind,
Something happens.
Something happens to the air;
It seems to get warmer,
Heavier,
Loaded with filth and unspeakable horror.
Every gesture, bowel movement, feels twice as expressive,
Conveying soiled air in one last, desperate bid for immortality.
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| Re: Why? by martysmiles |
12-Oct-02/10:41 AM |
Maybe they stare because they read the Bible, too?
"If a man also lie with mankind, as he lieth with a woman, both of them have committed an abomination: they shall surely be put to death; their blood shall be upon them." Lev 20:13
Actually, they stare at you because you're gay.
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| Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
13-Oct-02/1:50 PM |
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I AM BACHUS AND MY GREAT POWER COMES FROM HILARIOUS FLIPPANCE.
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| Re: On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~> |
13-Oct-02/1:52 PM |
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13-Oct-02/1:53 PM |
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I'm afraid this doesn't rhyme.
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| Re: Just a Girl by w~* ATHENA *~w |
13-Oct-02/1:54 PM |
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I hope you fall over and injure your face.
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| Re: Darkness by The_Shadows_Smile |
13-Oct-02/1:58 PM |
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GO AWAY YOU FUCKING GOTH.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Oct-02/2:00 PM |
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Look here, cuntwagon. I know you think you're incredibly interesting and multi-faceted, but all that means is you have no personality and the most unique thing you can think of to say about yourself is "WOW I KEEP CHANGING YOU NEVER KNOW WHAT I'M GOING TO DO NEXT BECAUSE WOW LOL I'M SO DEEP AND COMPLEX THAT MY TRUE FACE NEVER SHOWS ITSELF YOU HAVE TO GET TO KNOW ME TO KNOW THE REAL ME BECAUSE I AM UNIQUE." Perhaps if you knew that EVERY SINGLE FUCKING TEENAGER GIRL ON THE FACE OF THE PLANET feels this way about herself, you might not post so many shite lozenges on poemeranker.
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| Re: Recess by horus8 |
13-Oct-02/2:06 PM |
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This would be better if you didn't say "teeter totter playground" every fucking line.
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| Re: Lupus in A Minor by Wulf |
13-Oct-02/2:06 PM |
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| Re: Just Being Me by jsab78 |
13-Oct-02/2:11 PM |
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Oh, how interesting! A tedious, pointless exposition on how RACISM=WRONG. Well fuck me! You're really shaking the foundations of modern civilisation!! 90% of the people who read this thought RACISM=RIGHT, but luckily you've managed to change their minds with your excellent structure, exciting use of dramatic description, brave use of rhyme, interesting choices of spelling/grammar/punctuation, and WOW ZANY INCREDIBLE FUCKING ORIGINALITY OF SUBJECT MATTER! 10!!! Keep up the good work!!
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| Re: Free to Not Know Me by jsab78 |
13-Oct-02/2:14 PM |
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I don't know. Maybe they'd have it off?
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| Re: Jose Rizal(Our beloved) by Ninoy_Instigator |
13-Oct-02/2:15 PM |
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I think what you've done there is confused 'POETRY' with 'A DULL PROSAIC FABLE THAT IS BROKEN UP INTO LINES'.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Oct-02/2:18 PM |
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TOO MUCH METALLICA LYRICS, NOT ENOUGH PIE.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Oct-02/2:19 PM |
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You spelled "-=Watching him die=-" wrong.
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