Re: Sod by jrtails	14-Oct-02/7:28 AM
It doesn't matter if people don't like your work, jrtails -- three of my poemes were the three worst-rated poemes for a while, but I persevered and look where I am now!! Only halfway down the worst list!!!
Re: Snow-White by vulcan	14-Oct-02/7:31 AM
Oh good God, no!! Not an "GOWN OF SORROW"!!! I bought my gown from a very disreputable Merchante who had but a badmington racquet where his face should have been. Perhaps it is a GOWN OF SORROW.
Re: A Little Life by Tom Colebrooke	14-Oct-02/10:32 AM
Because it's a motherfucking bumblebee, that's why. What the hell is wrong with you?
Re: Two Towers by Tascobar	14-Oct-02/11:09 AM
This poeme is good, but I would change the title to "WTF?!?!"
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Oct-02/12:31 PM
This would probably be the best poeme ever if it was just the first two lines.
Re: The generosity of others. by darby pyn	19-Oct-02/12:44 PM
This isn't about generosity. Write another poeme saying how important it is to be generous.
Re: health cards by slipping	19-Oct-02/12:45 PM
too long, didn't read
Re: Death's Awaiting by The_Shadows_Smile	19-Oct-02/12:47 PM
"I hold it tight/Not wanting to let go". Oh, how beautifully that speaks of mine own experiences. If only I hadn't eaten those accursed prunes!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-02/5:50 AM
A good try!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-02/5:50 AM
A good try!
Re: Ted and Fred by worldsofwar	21-Oct-02/5:51 AM
Excellent use of 'Fred' to rhyme with 'Ted'!!!111
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Oct-02/5:52 AM
A good try!
Re: Daywalker by Blade	21-Oct-02/12:12 PM
This is either the best troll of all time, or the two biggest morons of all time.
Re: Daywalker by Blade	21-Oct-02/12:19 PM
QUICK EVERYONE! CONVENE IN THE CHATCAVE!!
Re: My Friend? by Blade	21-Oct-02/4:30 PM
It's spelled "gonhorrhehaea".
Re: Die by little_angel_maria	21-Oct-02/4:31 PM
And then, my friend, you die. And then, my friend, you DIE, man! beautiful. poetry at its finest.
Re: love by little_angel_maria	21-Oct-02/4:34 PM
What a pathetic fantasy. It's not even an poeme. Good effort!!
Re: On a chill morning by razorgrin	21-Oct-02/5:14 PM
The first four lines are extremely dandy.
Re: nothing could by nentwined	21-Oct-02/5:16 PM
What could have been so shocking that you lost all forward momentum? O God no -- don't say it! It wasn't... it surely couldn't have been...
Re: My Friend? by Blade	21-Oct-02/5:41 PM
I have a good friend named Sir Bum. A scoundrel like you he'd benumb With his rolling pins three And the greatest of glee. Wait, hold on a sec. I've just come.