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Death's Awaiting (Free verse) by The_Shadows_Smile
Death Beauty in the darkness A knife in my hand I hold it tight Not wanting to let go People sit around me I can't see them It is dark Beautiful Enchanting Darkness I drive the knife into my heart All seems peacful No love No pain No anything From the old world of choas To the new Pain Power Stress All taken off my shoulders Finally I am at peace
Up the ladder: Should of
Down the ladder: Fifty if Nifty
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.125
Weighted score: 4.2267933
Overall Rank: 13211
Posted: October 19, 2002 4:03 AM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2002 4:03 AM PDT
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[0] Tintagiles @ 142.166.120.47 | 19-Oct-02/7:17 AM | Reply
God help us all! Vermillion lives!
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.103 | 19-Oct-02/12:47 PM | Reply
"I hold it tight/Not wanting to let go". Oh, how beautifully that speaks of mine own experiences. If only I hadn't eaten those accursed prunes!
[4] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Dec-02/4:47 PM | Reply
Me too. pleasant dreams.g
[4] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Dec-02/7:09 PM | Reply
change choas to choad.
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