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Death's Awaiting (Free verse) by The_Shadows_Smile

Death Beauty in the darkness A knife in my hand I hold it tight Not wanting to let go People sit around me I can't see them It is dark Beautiful Enchanting Darkness I drive the knife into my heart All seems peacful No love No pain No anything From the old world of choas To the new Pain Power Stress All taken off my shoulders Finally I am at peace

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 19-Oct-02/12:47 PM
"I hold it tight/Not wanting to let go". Oh, how beautifully that speaks of mine own experiences. If only I hadn't eaten those accursed prunes!




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