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Ted and Fred (Limerick) by worldsofwar There was a lad called Ted,
Who was lock in his bed,
His girl was a mushty,
But he though she was cushty,
But she really likes Fred
Up the ladder:
Emptiness
Down the ladder:
A Time for More War
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.5454545
Posted: October 21, 2002 5:10 AM PDT; Last modified: October 21, 2002 5:10 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.5716164 Overall Rank: 13580 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.245.180
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21-Oct-02/5:51 AM
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Excellent use of 'Fred' to rhyme with 'Ted'!!!111
timing is everything and you have nothing.
Appallingly rhymed and written. A deserving 0/10. Well done dear.
This is a dreadful poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
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