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Ted and Fred (Limerick) by worldsofwar

There was a lad called Ted, Who was lock in his bed, His girl was a mushty, But he though she was cushty, But she really likes Fred

Edna Sweetlove 21-Jun-06/4:48 AM
Appallingly rhymed and written. A deserving 0/10. Well done dear.




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