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Free verse № 20103

Just a Girl

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Oct 2002 · 2 comments

I bleed and I am new. All just for you. I hope and I pray for another day to not bleed to feel need. I give life you call me wife. And even amidst the strife that can strike like a knife. We love and make love. A baby's cry a lullaby. Sleep well my beautiful man.

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[n/a] INTRANSIT 13-Oct-02/6:03 AM Reply

I picked up a connection between husband/boyfriend and a newborn. Slightly scary but endearing too.8

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-Oct-02/1:54 PM Reply

I hope you fall over and injure your face.