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Jose Rizal(Our beloved) (Free verse) by Ninoy_Instigator
Let me tell you a story
Of a man named Rizal
He was a Filipino martyr
Who saved us all
The Spanish shot him down
But it did them no good
Because with his death
The whole country suddenly stood
In a state of rebellion
His poetry sparked emotion
His death was the final straw
It was the magic potion
Rizal's words were deep
They defied Spanish logic
Our children were mistreated
So we fought with those who caused it.
Bonifacio led the war
And yes we did prevail
Rizal's words were the key
They made evil set sail
But the war still isn't over
The Spanish were not the threat
The Americans came over
And sentenced us to our death.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.095362
Overall Rank: 6074
Posted: October 6, 2002 9:04 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2002 9:04 PM PDT
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