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Hit & Run (Free verse) by horus8
laughing
with a friend
leaving the studio
he still has glass
of merlot sloshing
we have been
drinking steady
all day and night
is that a red light?
no..it's the back of a honda!
standing there
we are all confused
i say are you okay
but he is already calling johnny.
i burn rubber down a side street
as my liscense plate flips over.
some things are better than a d.u.i
like a sore necked hangover
and a week of door bell paranoia
like some more hair of the dog that bit me...
and maybe a new bumper....
well..maybe not.
maybe louder gram parsons
bigger tires and mud flaps
would you have stayed?
[Joshua tree will never let me be]
<plus that was my last drink and chance card>
a finger printed glass rolls still in the gutter...
lets be a bit more careful...shall we..thanks.
i'll try..
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9444447
Weighted score: 6.8522277
Overall Rank: 311
Posted: October 9, 2002 6:05 PM PDT; Last modified: October 9, 2002 7:21 PM PDT
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