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Shadow's Overcast (Free verse) by Luzr
I fear the rising of the dawn
And the waking of the life that I talk to others about
When its in moments like these, when I'm alone
And nothing in the world can reach me that I feel alive
No burdens, No worries, No stress, No pressure
Just calm cool relaxation and cigarette prest to my lips
Pleasurous burning of breath
Hiding in the shadows
At ease without the slightest hint of pressure pushing down on me
Nothing to fear for hours to come
But as soon as the sun rises
I'll feel that tension rise back into my shoulders
My eyes will lose their mystery
Instead they'd be blood shot, bleeding til they are dead
My voice will once again be another bravado
My tongue razor tipped but going dull
Gone are the sweet midnight harmonies
Gone til the day is done
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.7
Weighted score: 6.85
Overall Rank: 312
Posted: June 26, 2003 11:44 PM PDT; Last modified: June 26, 2003 11:44 PM PDT
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