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Free verse № 60673

Luster

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Aug 2003 · 2 comments

etched deep in the ocean of my mind like a lusterless photograph is the memory I have of you striking me across the face with your brass-knuckled fist. For years it was submerged in its watery grave, but now it's been disturbed, and the grave has been unearthed. I can taste the blood again.

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[9] horus8 15-Aug-03/11:47 AM Reply
Cujo.
[7] Son Of A Bitch 15-Aug-03/12:15 PM Reply
not bad, groovy crescendo. 7