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Luster (Free verse) by dragonfly
etched deep in the ocean of my mind
like a lusterless photograph
is the memory I have of you
striking me across the face
with your brass-knuckled fist.
For years it was submerged
in its watery grave,
but now it's been disturbed,
and the grave has been unearthed.
I can taste the blood again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.7
Weighted score: 6.85
Overall Rank: 313
Posted: August 15, 2003 10:52 AM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2003 10:52 AM PDT
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