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Luster (Free verse) by dragonfly
etched deep in the ocean of my mind like a lusterless photograph is the memory I have of you striking me across the face with your brass-knuckled fist. For years it was submerged in its watery grave, but now it's been disturbed, and the grave has been unearthed. I can taste the blood again.

Up the ladder: Shadow's Overcast
Down the ladder: Three Fall

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.7
Weighted score: 6.85
Overall Rank: 313
Posted: August 15, 2003 10:52 AM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2003 10:52 AM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Aug-03/11:47 AM | Reply
Cujo.
[7] Son Of A Bitch @ 195.92.168.168 | 15-Aug-03/12:15 PM | Reply
not bad, groovy crescendo. 7
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