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Luster (Free verse) by dragonfly

etched deep in the ocean of my mind like a lusterless photograph is the memory I have of you striking me across the face with your brass-knuckled fist. For years it was submerged in its watery grave, but now it's been disturbed, and the grave has been unearthed. I can taste the blood again.

Son Of A Bitch 15-Aug-03/12:15 PM
not bad, groovy crescendo. 7




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