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Re: a comment on The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite 24-Jan-06/4:37 PM
thank you for the good advice.....
I will try to edit it as such, in the next few days or so

-megan
Re: Before Existence by Jsylum 9-Apr-05/9:57 AM
i love some of the imagery
Re: Rustling Wind by laura2224rn 9-Apr-05/9:53 AM
i'm sorry but there is no answer to all the worldy grief's - that is one question that has puzzled philosophers for centuries
Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 9-Apr-05/9:44 AM
again,this is senryu not haiku
Re: Kansas City by PodPoet 9-Apr-05/9:26 AM
excellent
Re: You Were There by danevie 9-Apr-05/9:14 AM
you have the disconcerting habit of having someone remedy your ills in the past tense while you are still in the present-----
Re: Within A World by forestchild7 9-Apr-05/9:04 AM
"as if it wil all my problems mend" ---- if you can't make your rhyming sound at all natural perhaps you should not try rhyming - this sounds incredibly forced
Re: Coloured waifs home by horus8 8-Apr-05/6:54 PM
this is actually a senryu
Re: Biased. by darby pyn 6-Apr-05/10:04 AM
nice
Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 6-Apr-05/10:01 AM
you have the unnerving habit of writing poems twice the length they need to be,

have you considered seeing the dali exhibit in philly?
Re: ?? by timvick473662003 6-Apr-05/9:57 AM
to pimply
Re: Everytime by krazymofo321 6-Apr-05/9:50 AM
nice sentiment but its really not that original, and sounds kind of pimply
Re: Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8 4-Apr-05/9:45 AM
10 because i didnt think someone could keep my attention for 14 minutes but you did -
Re: The Long Night by Tangerines 4-Apr-05/9:34 AM
i like the way this paints a pictures of the person, but is simply written
Re: What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583 4-Apr-05/9:33 AM
good questions - not sure how well it would work in lyrical form....
Re: Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88 4-Apr-05/9:31 AM
we all suffer - suck it up

if your feeling sad - this may sound good to you but to the rest of world its dribble - try writing about sadness when you're happy and happiness when you're sad - it works better that way
Re: Was it real by mishy_lee 4-Apr-05/9:27 AM
"i'm dying here slowly" - this part sounds nice - but the rest seems kind of forced --
Re: Icarus Down by horus8 4-Apr-05/9:25 AM
i like this
Re: Glory Bound by kazeaki 4-Apr-05/9:21 AM
"let them say you are of nothing made".....the whole inverting words to make things rhymes just doesnt sound good..
Re: Into My World by sliver 2-Apr-05/11:11 AM
this is so beautiful


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