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Everytime (Free verse) by krazymofo321 Everytime is see you,
look in your green eyes
lifes fine, all my worries arent mine.
Everytime I touch you,
I think about it so much
I want you, I could never get enough.
Everytime I kiss you,
falling in your grace
I love you,
dont let my feelings be replaced.
Up the ladder:
She wishes
Down the ladder:
Cloche.
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Posted: December 6, 2003 5:23 PM PST; Last modified: December 6, 2003 5:23 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.910598 Overall Rank: 9582 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.116.54
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6-Dec-03/6:04 PM
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Wow, you are a mofo.
I say the same damn thang when i look at my pet lobster. Blessed with a 7
nice sentiment but its really not that original, and sounds kind of pimply
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