Was it real

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

Sitting alone in my room thinking of you again today remembering the first time that we kissed and how you took my breath away. Missing you more than ever I never thought I could cry this much noticing how hard this is I'm dying here slowly without your touch. Wondering what your doing now where you are and how you feel thinking of your love for me curious as to if it was real. I'm hurting and confused like never ever before going crazy without you missing you more and more. Thinking of our times together I'm not gonna let this bring me down instead I'll smile at the good ones and forget the ones that made me breakdown.

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[n/a] deleted user 26-Aug-02/10:52 AM Reply

i, too, remember that first kiss! it was magical, indeed. wondering what i'm doing now? well, mostly watching TV and reading about the history of Iceland. how about you?

[9] timvick473662003 4-Dec-03/4:50 PM Reply

really good, i like it alot. very from the heart it seems, have a 9

[7] dancin_n_da_moonlite 4-Apr-05/9:27 AM Reply

"i'm dying here slowly" - this part sounds nice - but the rest seems kind of forced --