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Kansas City (Free verse) by PodPoet This is Kansas City
Staid and pure
With the bitter irony of bigotry
Thinly veiled beneath the white cake
Of American innocence
Up the ladder:
Looking Up
Down the ladder:
Pancakes
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Posted: April 8, 2005 9:16 PM PDT; Last modified: April 11, 2005 11:21 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8662 Comments:
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dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 152.163.100.135
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9-Apr-05/9:26 AM
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excellent
Well stated, though I disagree with your conclusion.
kansas? innocent? BAH.
I wanted more...another 5 lines, please. 9
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