|
|
Pancakes (Free verse) by raven_the_poet
When I wake up in the morning,
I smell syrup, eggs, and bacon,
Orange juice, and pancakes.
Like most mornings,
I rush down the stairs
And into the kitchen.
The smell of breakfast hits me
As I jump into my chair and
Dip my fork into the luscious pancake sauce.
I pick the crispiest bacon,
And chew my eggs,
Hurrying to get through
Before school.
The next day is the same,
And it always will be,
Until the world runs out
Of pancakes.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
0 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 0 |
8 |
|
1 | 0 |
7 |
|
0 | 0 |
6 |
|
1 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 0 |
4 |
|
0 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 0 |
2 |
|
0 | 0 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
1 | 0 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8579
Posted: February 19, 2006 6:12 PM PST; Last modified: February 19, 2006 6:12 PM PST
View voting details
Comments:
152 view(s)
|
On a slightly different note, it reminded me of Bush's speech about America being addicted to oil, very topical indeed.