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Your Beautiful Silence (Free verse) by Enchantres
Eleven years have passed since you left us
There still is a emptyness in my soul
It will alway's be there
I want it to stay because, it's YOU
Your smile, your passionate eyes
The eyes with such glance in it
I will never see them again
I watch the leaves fall in the Autumn
I see the snow falling down in the Winter
And I watch the rain falling down on your gravestone
Can you hear me?
Watch the black Crow fly, fly high in the sky
Falling down on you, protecting you, embracing you
Because it can't rain all the time
The flowers I left for you will once die
My terrible pain of loss, is in no words to describe
A wonderful bright spiritual person but mostly my love
No more..
My tears will never dry, maybe you won't see them all the time..
But they are alway's there, will forever be there
I want them to be there
My lovely Angel
I hope you will find the rest that the Angels gave to you
And may you rest in sweet heavenly peace
Maybe one day there will be a crow on your grave
And I can listen to that beautiful silence...
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Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8674
Posted: August 17, 2004 2:09 PM PDT; Last modified: August 17, 2004 2:09 PM PDT
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The poem means a lot to me, it's about a very special person in my life.
Thanks for the vote by the way :)