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The Long Night (Free verse) by Tangerines
You are asleep on the couch in your apartment
in New York. The walls are green
and cracked and stained with water.
There is a picture in the kitchen
of Cuba, the house in which you were born.
Your mother is standing in the doorway.
She is wearing a white dress. Her hand
is raised, palm outward, in greeting
or farewell. Now you are dreaming of her
and of green jungles, low hills
rising verdant from the fog.
You are asleep on the couch. Your eyes
open, shut, flicker, close. You are still.
Around you, everything is silent:
the cars on the streets below have stopped;
people in cafes are motionless;
the sun is frozen overhead, a great dull lamp.
The world is waiting for you. The city.
It is holding its breath.
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Posted: July 31, 2002 10:55 AM PDT; Last modified: July 31, 2002 10:55 AM PDT
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