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Within A World (Free verse) by forestchild7
Lost within a world of wonder,
pausing where the streams don't flow;
It's quiet, and I can feel the sunlight,
streaming past me in little patches of gold.
I step lightly and pause,
listening to the birds,
As they chirp and warble,
and I know they are true words.
I settle beside a tree,
and listen to the wind;
It wails and whistles to me,
as if it will all my problems mend.
This world of wonder
seems such a beautiful place,
And I sit here and think,
of how I may spread the Mother's grace.
We don't always listen;
We're not always sure,
but when we see the creation,
We want to always be near her.
So listen to your heart,
Be quiet so the silence may speak;
Remember Gaia's wisdom,
and how we may be meek.
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Weighted score: 5.409091
Overall Rank: 3078
Posted: July 7, 2002 12:50 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2002 12:50 PM PDT
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With not a turgid or pompous line insight. Heres ye well earned 10