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Love Obsession (the stalker's song) (Lyric) by evergreen It's my posession
this love obsession
you won't see me coming for your love
I'll make you - take you break you
make you scream aloud
you're my love posession
my sweet obsession
One day I'll hear you say my name
and you'll say it low and sweet
I'll forgive you what you've done
when I make you stand next to me
It's like posession
this love obsession
you won't see me coming for your love
I'll make you - take you break you
gonna make you scream aloud
you're my love posession
my sweet obsession
I know how to make you love me
I'm so hungry for your love
see the others sigh for you
but I'm the one who'll die for you
I'm the only one who really knows how
You're my posession
it's this love obsession
you wont see me coming for your love
I'll make you - take you break you
gonna make you scream aloud
you're my love posession
my sweet obsession
You're my posession
my sweet love obession
Up the ladder:
South Brooklyn Avenue
Down the ladder:
Within A World
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.4666667
Posted: July 7, 2002 5:58 PM PDT; Last modified: July 7, 2002 5:58 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.4110384 Overall Rank: 3077 Comments:
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pkdrunner @ 64.229.249.254
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11-Jul-02/7:53 PM
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don't understand 'make you stand next to me' and also i'm the only one who knows how to die for you? doesn't fit with making you scream..but then i've never been a stalker so I don't know how they think :)
With the right chords and melody this would make a good song. Add the word, "for" between you and what in the tenth line to make it 100%. nice workh
um, there already is a song. It's fluttering around in my mind right now, like a wild butterfly.
with the wrong chords and melody this would make a really bad song. Whoreus8 stating the bleedin obvious. What sort of music do you like whoreus? - gee i like good music.
Evergreen - super little poem thingy, but not as good as the other one about a total slag waking up next to someone they don't even remember..... It wasn't a personal experience was it oh shit i may have offended again
Nice. 7. One of the few lyrics I've read which hasn't made me think of dire thrash-metal eighties bands. Good work son.
Oh? and it didn't remind you of, um, any mid-eighties dance music, at all?
posession? possession? Looks wrong in spelling, but I'm feeling too lazy to look it up, pretty sure double s's are in order... other than that...not bad. I would change the title though...leave off the stalker bit! A Dominant would say that obsession is a far cry from stalking. (And all the subs/submissives out there will be creaming to this song...LOL!)They are not one and the same. (Provided the "take you" you are speaking of here is not akin to "take' in the case of rape. I am going to assume that you 'take' does not refer to such a thing...therefore...I like it! (Even if it does seem like a copy cat of another song we all know!)
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