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Love Obsession (the stalker's song)

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Jul 2002 · 9 comments

It's my posession this love obsession you won't see me coming for your love I'll make you - take you break you make you scream aloud you're my love posession my sweet obsession One day I'll hear you say my name and you'll say it low and sweet I'll forgive you what you've done when I make you stand next to me It's like posession this love obsession you won't see me coming for your love I'll make you - take you break you gonna make you scream aloud you're my love posession my sweet obsession I know how to make you love me I'm so hungry for your love see the others sigh for you but I'm the one who'll die for you I'm the only one who really knows how You're my posession it's this love obsession you wont see me coming for your love I'll make you - take you break you gonna make you scream aloud you're my love posession my sweet obsession You're my posession my sweet love obession

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9 comments

[7] pkdrunner 11-Jul-02/7:53 PM Reply
don't understand 'make you stand next to me' and also i'm the only one who knows how to die for you? doesn't fit with making you scream..but then i've never been a stalker so I don't know how they think :)
[n/a] evergreen 11-Jul-02/8:26 PM Reply
hope i'm replying right.. i am not the stalker - my ex was. good luck with your stalking career :)
[8] horus8 12-Jul-02/6:36 PM Reply
With the right chords and melody this would make a good song. Add the word, "for" between you and what in the tenth line to make it 100%. nice workh
[3] Goad › horus8 23-Jan-04/4:05 PM Reply
um, there already is a song. It's fluttering around in my mind right now, like a wild butterfly.
[8] ==Doylum 5-Aug-02/6:34 PM Reply
with the wrong chords and melody this would make a really bad song. Whoreus8 stating the bleedin obvious. What sort of music do you like whoreus? - gee i like good music.
Evergreen - super little poem thingy, but not as good as the other one about a total slag waking up next to someone they don't even remember..... It wasn't a personal experience was it oh shit i may have offended again
[7] Tarquin De La Bog 14-Aug-02/5:09 PM Reply
Nice. 7. One of the few lyrics I've read which hasn't made me think of dire thrash-metal eighties bands. Good work son.
[3] Goad › Tarquin De La Bog 23-Jan-04/4:09 PM Reply
Oh? and it didn't remind you of, um, any mid-eighties dance music, at all?
[n/a] evergreen 14-Aug-02/6:52 PM Reply
thanks for the kind words, tarquin! i am not a guy, by the way :)
[8] LilMsLadyPoet 14-Jun-05/4:38 PM Reply
posession? possession? Looks wrong in spelling, but I'm feeling too lazy to look it up, pretty sure double s's are in order... other than that...not bad. I would change the title though...leave off the stalker bit! A Dominant would say that obsession is a far cry from stalking. (And all the subs/submissives out there will be creaming to this song...LOL!)They are not one and the same. (Provided the "take you" you are speaking of here is not akin to "take' in the case of rape. I am going to assume that you 'take' does not refer to such a thing...therefore...I like it! (Even if it does seem like a copy cat of another song we all know!)