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Love Obsession (the stalker's song) (Lyric) by evergreen

It's my posession this love obsession you won't see me coming for your love I'll make you - take you break you make you scream aloud you're my love posession my sweet obsession One day I'll hear you say my name and you'll say it low and sweet I'll forgive you what you've done when I make you stand next to me It's like posession this love obsession you won't see me coming for your love I'll make you - take you break you gonna make you scream aloud you're my love posession my sweet obsession I know how to make you love me I'm so hungry for your love see the others sigh for you but I'm the one who'll die for you I'm the only one who really knows how You're my posession it's this love obsession you wont see me coming for your love I'll make you - take you break you gonna make you scream aloud you're my love posession my sweet obsession You're my posession my sweet love obession

LilMsLadyPoet 14-Jun-05/4:38 PM
posession? possession? Looks wrong in spelling, but I'm feeling too lazy to look it up, pretty sure double s's are in order... other than that...not bad. I would change the title though...leave off the stalker bit! A Dominant would say that obsession is a far cry from stalking. (And all the subs/submissives out there will be creaming to this song...LOL!)They are not one and the same. (Provided the "take you" you are speaking of here is not akin to "take' in the case of rape. I am going to assume that you 'take' does not refer to such a thing...therefore...I like it! (Even if it does seem like a copy cat of another song we all know!)




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