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Biased. (Free verse) by darby pyn
The sentenced attracted a thousand opinions community decision
with no room for revisions. the final delivery a button away sacrifice
and glory a target display. blind loyalty see no evil hear no questions
tell no lies. strength in numbers overconfident condescending and
arrogant. lost in the space between your conscience and soul
blame, be guilty be a moving hole filled with the coal for
the diamond harvest burn off the black to conceive the white.
retractions, screaming, stealing and blood dead at birth money
from mud. for your own good , in our best interest, no restraint
no remorse. assimilate, bend be grateful scattered allegiance
the price for the faithful. shattered limbs with no jury for
grievance. natural selection.
evolution by war.
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Posted: December 3, 2003 6:16 PM PST; Last modified: December 3, 2003 6:16 PM PST
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to it. "evolution by war" seemed to fit the rhyme flow better
to my ear. but you make a good point.
thank you.