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Aurora (Haiku) by Aetius
Brazenly her wares are displayed on the corner Nameless red flower

Up the ladder: Moving On
Down the ladder: Genesis

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6418
Posted: November 15, 2005 9:43 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2005 9:43 PM PST
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[10] nentwined @ 68.232.253.122 | 15-Nov-05/9:46 PM | Reply
I liked this a lot. I couldn't decide how simple or deep it was supposed to be, and my head flipflopped between ideas. decided on simple and deep. ;)
[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 | 16-Nov-05/7:40 AM | Reply
Good one.

Did you know that your list of poems in your homepage form the acrostic "ASS. U C IT?
[n/a] Aetius @ 71.112.163.184 > ALChemy | 16-Nov-05/9:10 AM | Reply
Hadn't noticed. You should see what the Sonnet I wrote spells out!
[n/a] ALChemy @ 24.74.101.159 > Aetius | 16-Nov-05/10:25 AM | Reply
I could if you'd post it.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 16-Nov-05/10:52 AM | Reply
nice one.
[7] Dovina @ 209.247.222.94 | 16-Nov-05/8:06 PM | Reply
I see no point in shrouding a thing like this. In allowing several ingterpretations, you do what I do, and incur the consternation of me. maybe you meant something particuar, maybe nebulosity. It seems to me that a poem should at least purport something, not paint lines pointing in all directions. It's ok if readers find other meanings, but some meaning should stand our like a basket of fruit or a tree.
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