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Aurora (Haiku) by Aetius Brazenly her wares
are displayed on the corner
Nameless red flower
Up the ladder:
Yesterdays testament
Down the ladder:
Broken
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Posted: November 15, 2005 9:43 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2005 9:43 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6422 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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nentwined @ 68.232.253.122
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15-Nov-05/9:46 PM
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I liked this a lot. I couldn't decide how simple or deep it was supposed to be, and my head flipflopped between ideas. decided on simple and deep. ;)
Good one.
Did you know that your list of poems in your homepage form the acrostic "ASS. U C IT?
Hadn't noticed. You should see what the Sonnet I wrote spells out!
I could if you'd post it.
nice one.
I see no point in shrouding a thing like this. In allowing several ingterpretations, you do what I do, and incur the consternation of me. maybe you meant something particuar, maybe nebulosity. It seems to me that a poem should at least purport something, not paint lines pointing in all directions. It's ok if readers find other meanings, but some meaning should stand our like a basket of fruit or a tree.
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