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Too late to live (Free verse) by liquidlama
Its not to late for me don't wanna be lonely Started, quited it he and she Left, pulled away from the happy, glowing cohesive groups. Too much head, I've lost my heart can't feel my soul Pulled so far, so long away that I have no place to call my base. Brother, accept me Sister, love me Put your arms down put'em around Yeah it's not too late to let me in I know it starts from within Believe that wer'e all kin. So my essence, unchangeable essence Is a part thats part of you.

Up the ladder: The Better Beggar
Down the ladder: Whispering Water

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.285714
Weighted score: 5.0768404
Overall Rank: 6497
Posted: July 16, 2002 11:01 PM PDT; Last modified: July 16, 2002 11:01 PM PDT
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Jul-02/11:58 PM | Reply
I love it but can we do something with the third line? For instance:
My fixed perception is in need of transpericy:Started then stopped shy of the he she:Forced to ponder why they shun me:Fuck it. It's fine how it is. I'm drunk e
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