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Too late to live (Free verse) by liquidlama
Its not to late for me
don't wanna be lonely
Started, quited it he and she
Left, pulled away from the happy, glowing cohesive groups.
Too much head, I've lost my heart can't feel my soul
Pulled so far, so long away
that I have no place to call my base.
Brother, accept me
Sister, love me
Put your arms down
put'em around
Yeah it's not too late to let me in
I know it starts from within
Believe that wer'e all kin.
So my essence, unchangeable essence
Is a part thats part of you.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.285714
Weighted score: 5.0768404
Overall Rank: 6497
Posted: July 16, 2002 11:01 PM PDT; Last modified: July 16, 2002 11:01 PM PDT
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My fixed perception is in need of transpericy:Started then stopped shy of the he she:Forced to ponder why they shun me:Fuck it. It's fine how it is. I'm drunk e