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Aurora (Haiku) by Aetius

Brazenly her wares are displayed on the corner Nameless red flower

nentwined 15-Nov-05/9:46 PM
I liked this a lot. I couldn't decide how simple or deep it was supposed to be, and my head flipflopped between ideas. decided on simple and deep. ;)




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