Re: Our Soldiers by Lenore	6-Jul-05/8:22 AM
Actually, I think this isn't bad. Don't like the last line, but whatever.
Re: Promise Me by Taco	6-Jul-05/8:19 AM
bleeech.
Re: Born and Fed by Dovina	6-Jul-05/8:17 AM
Quite frankly, it's just boring.
Re: Because to Live I Must by TLRufener	6-Jul-05/8:14 AM
A trip to Salem, you must take.
Re: I Need Not be Told by Chelsio	6-Jul-05/8:13 AM
better than your other one, I'll give you that.
Re: Close to my Heart by Chelsio	6-Jul-05/8:12 AM
Ok, this is not great, but for 13 years old I'll say it's not bad.
Re: Last Vein by wilco	6-Jul-05/8:09 AM
Are you actually going to play this one? or just let it sit there?
Re: My Little Africa (edit) by Nuit	5-Jul-05/8:49 AM
I love how you left the misspelling in to illustrate the lack of education in Africa. That's great.
Re: Eternal Pain by lil_evil_boi	22-Jun-05/8:52 AM
Assignment: Read this to whoever it's for. If you get all the way through it without them A) Shooting themselves or B) shooting you, I'll give you a 10.
Re: Beach Volleyball by lil_evil_boi	14-Jun-05/10:52 AM
If you're any older that 7 or 8, this is terrible.
Re: Books by sacred_poet_me	14-Jun-05/10:49 AM
This has been said much better on those posters at the local library that say "Reading Is Super".
Re: Mr. Campbell's final journey by jroday	14-Jun-05/10:45 AM
feet are bare, not bear....unless maybe they're really hairy, in which case you might try something like Hobbit feet. So, this guy did something bad enough to get the chair for it and he's going to heaven...I'll never understand Christianity..you get to do whatever you want to do, and as long as you say you're sorry, you still get to go to heaven. YAHOO
Re: a comment on Unclean by Dovina	14-Jun-05/9:49 AM
You're an even bigger idiot. As intolerant as Jew-Hating? Are you living in a retard home?
Re: a comment on Unclean by Dovina	14-Jun-05/9:48 AM
You're an idiot. There's much worse than that out there.
Re: I want you by nicole081083	13-Jun-05/6:57 AM
Write this from the point of view of a Rwandan refugee and you've got something.
Re: Perfect place by gothiclovepoetiss	13-Jun-05/6:55 AM
Not very goth...try rewriting it with different words..and a different theme...and change the title...that would make it better in my opinion.
Re: a comment on -750,000 in Rwanda by ALChemy	13-Jun-05/6:44 AM
Are you SURE it's all true? Were you there?
Re: a comment on MTV's The Real World: Allpoetry.com by Bluemonkey	25-May-05/8:33 AM
I apologize, my friend, but Nentwined has yet to put a category on the Poemranker called Bluemonkey's Haiku...the moment the does I'll change it, I assure you.
Re: a comment on MTV's The Real World: Poemranker by Bluemonkey	24-May-05/11:17 AM
do what?
Re: Ungrateful by Damien_	24-May-05/10:45 AM
"I am Ungrateful, Ungratefully.... That's simply fucking awful, man.