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Re: Crack baby by Caducus 6-Jul-05/8:30 AM
Ahh, drugs. super. Ever seen a crack baby? ghastly.
regarding some deleted poem... 6-Jul-05/8:30 AM
no
regarding some deleted poem... 6-Jul-05/8:35 AM
mnnnmmnnnhhhnnnnuuuuuuuuugg
Re: Crying Tears with No Home by TLRufener 7-Jul-05/9:30 AM
Not terrible but the grammtical and spelling mistakes are very noticeable. If you're going to write a poem in honor of your friend, you should at least take the ime to proofread it.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Jul-05/11:13 AM
Has it escaped your attention that nobody likes puns?
Re: Almost Persuaded by Dovina 11-Jul-05/11:28 AM
Good rhymes. Not wild about the poem itself, but I'll give you a 6 for that.
Re: A World At War by Damien 11-Jul-05/11:32 AM
If you're going to write about something like this...and be as graphic as you have, for God sakes, man, don't rhyme.
Re: JUST A FEW by rbooey 11-Jul-05/11:37 AM
Please refer to my reply to your comment on the suggestions page for my reason for giving this a 0.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Jul-05/11:38 AM
You're one of the few people here that actually seem to be learning how to write.
Re: Slice Open My Body by TLRufener 11-Jul-05/11:39 AM
boo. You can and have done better.
Re: Endurance by Dovina 11-Jul-05/11:40 AM
I kind of like this...despite what the general consensus seems to be..gotta go with my gut..
Re: Flies in the ointment. by darby pyn 11-Jul-05/11:43 AM
I'm confused as hell on this one.
Re: When my place is placeless by Prince of Void 11-Jul-05/11:44 AM
Good God, man.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Jul-05/11:46 AM
You need to be able to connect all this a little better. It sounds good, but a lot of it feels like it's just jumping from place to place.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Jul-05/11:47 AM
Ok, this one's not good.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Jul-05/11:48 AM
This was kind of good whe I read it real fast.
regarding some deleted poem... 11-Jul-05/11:49 AM
better.
Re: a.m. by oneglove 11-Jul-05/11:49 AM
uh, ok.
Re: Yield by wilco 12-Oct-05/6:27 AM
Better than anything you've written in a long while.
regarding some deleted poem... 10-Feb-06/9:14 AM
ha


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