| Re: Yield by wilco |
12-Oct-05/6:27 AM |
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Better than anything you've written in a long while.
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| Re: a comment on Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey |
12-Jul-05/6:39 AM |
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That would be not a good idea.
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| Re: a comment on Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey |
11-Jul-05/11:52 AM |
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Oh...no that's not what I was talking about but i guess I can see why you'd get that.
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| Re: a comment on Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey |
11-Jul-05/11:50 AM |
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and why would I capitalize 'you'?
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| Re: a comment on Al-Qaida Blues by Bluemonkey |
11-Jul-05/11:50 AM |
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| Re: a.m. by oneglove |
11-Jul-05/11:49 AM |
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| Re: When my place is placeless by Prince of Void |
11-Jul-05/11:44 AM |
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| Re: Flies in the ointment. by darby pyn |
11-Jul-05/11:43 AM |
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I'm confused as hell on this one.
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| Re: Endurance by Dovina |
11-Jul-05/11:40 AM |
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I kind of like this...despite what the general consensus seems to be..gotta go with my gut..
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| Re: Slice Open My Body by TLRufener |
11-Jul-05/11:39 AM |
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boo. You can and have done better.
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| Re: JUST A FEW by rbooey |
11-Jul-05/11:37 AM |
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Please refer to my reply to your comment on the suggestions page for my reason for giving this a 0.
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| Re: A World At War by Damien |
11-Jul-05/11:32 AM |
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If you're going to write about something like this...and be as graphic as you have, for God sakes, man, don't rhyme.
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| Re: Almost Persuaded by Dovina |
11-Jul-05/11:28 AM |
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Good rhymes. Not wild about the poem itself, but I'll give you a 6 for that.
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| Re: a comment on JUST A FEW by rbooey |
11-Jul-05/6:28 AM |
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Actually, i noticed too...and to be honest with you, it's quite annoying.
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| Re: a comment on My Little Africa (edit) by Nuit |
7-Jul-05/10:28 AM |
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I was being sarcastic, you dimwit.
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| Re: Crying Tears with No Home by TLRufener |
7-Jul-05/9:30 AM |
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Not terrible but the grammtical and spelling mistakes are very noticeable. If you're going to write a poem in honor of your friend, you should at least take the ime to proofread it.
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| Re: a comment on The Bastardization of Hypocrisy by Bluemonkey |
6-Jul-05/9:06 AM |
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Hmmm...perhaps if I added some barnyard animals you would understand.
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| Re: Crack baby by Caducus |
6-Jul-05/8:30 AM |
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Ahh, drugs. super. Ever seen a crack baby? ghastly.
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| Re: Mother Earth by TLRufener |
6-Jul-05/8:26 AM |
Lose everything but this:
Mother Earth
Has gone to sleep.
Lamenting, the wind
Wails and weeps.
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| Re: A Place by Celtic |
6-Jul-05/8:25 AM |
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Not big on Leprechauns and Pixies.
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