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Al-Qaida Blues (Free verse) by Bluemonkey
This is the teenage angst that I’ve had since I turned twenty. This is the casual lament for you and your absolute righteousness. This is my finest hour at the end of our endless days.

Up the ladder: The Drop
Down the ladder: Why?

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10924
Posted: July 11, 2005 11:26 AM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2005 11:26 AM PDT
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[8] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 | 11-Jul-05/11:47 AM | Reply
Who can say what they feel? I think this might sum it up as well as any. Might want to capitalize You.
[n/a] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.99 > Dovina | 11-Jul-05/11:50 AM | Reply
What who feels?
[n/a] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.99 > Bluemonkey | 11-Jul-05/11:50 AM | Reply
and why would I capitalize 'you'?
[8] Dovina @ 69.175.32.185 > Bluemonkey | 11-Jul-05/11:51 AM | Reply
I'm assuming that because of the title, you are talking about an Arab teen with explosives taped around his stomach.
[n/a] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.99 > Dovina | 11-Jul-05/11:52 AM | Reply
Oh...no that's not what I was talking about but i guess I can see why you'd get that.
[10] edpeterson @ 68.79.22.44 | 11-Jul-05/5:57 PM | Reply
I decided to become the anti-cockphage, and vote 10 on every single poeme on the site.

But then I thought, no. I can't be arsed.
[n/a] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.99 > edpeterson | 12-Jul-05/6:39 AM | Reply
That would be not a good idea.
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