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Slice Open My Body (Free verse) by TLRufener Slice open my body
And tear out my heart
You have already
Torn out my heart
Ground my bloody corpse
Into the dirt
Since Iâm already dead
I know it wonât hurt
My entire heart and soul
Belonged to you
And you just left me alone
Like I knew you would do
Ever since the day
I proclaimed my love
You treated me like
I was an old torn up glove
Never once did you
Really care about me
You were the one who pushed
Me off the cliff into the sea
Up the ladder:
Time Will Change
Down the ladder:
Because to Live I Must
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Posted: July 9, 2005 9:45 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2005 9:45 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.713913 Overall Rank: 11963 Comments:
boo. You can and have done better.
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I'd write something like
"I'd tell you to slice open my body
and tear out my heart,
but you already have."