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Slice Open My Body (Free verse) by TLRufener

Slice open my body And tear out my heart You have already Torn out my heart Ground my bloody corpse Into the dirt Since I’m already dead I know it won’t hurt My entire heart and soul Belonged to you And you just left me alone Like I knew you would do Ever since the day I proclaimed my love You treated me like I was an old torn up glove Never once did you Really care about me You were the one who pushed Me off the cliff into the sea

Bluemonkey 11-Jul-05/11:39 AM
boo. You can and have done better.




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