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The Bastardization of Hypocrisy (Free verse) by Bluemonkey
Television. Radio. Internet. Welcome to the disjointed collective; Feel yourself devolve.

Up the ladder: Conjugate the verb
Down the ladder: Lost

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 12012
Posted: July 5, 2005 8:40 AM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2005 8:40 AM PDT
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Comments:
[2] Nuit @ 86.128.208.45 | 5-Jul-05/1:27 PM | Reply
I cant see the relevance of the title to the verse.
[3] Dovina @ 69.235.21.28 | 5-Jul-05/1:36 PM | Reply
Wasn't hypocracy always a bastard kind of thing?
[n/a] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.99 > Dovina | 6-Jul-05/9:06 AM | Reply
Hmmm...perhaps if I added some barnyard animals you would understand.
[n/a] zodiac @ 86.108.11.226 > Dovina | 7-Jul-05/2:30 AM | Reply
I'm with you.

But maybe we're coming at it wrong. What's the bastard of hypocrisy? Well, depends on who's the father. Can we do tests? At a guess, I'd say the bastard of Hypocrisy (by Television, who's incidentally married to an aging stage actress) produces Bluemonkey, who hates them both and yet is hopeless heir to their various unique stupidities.
[4] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 69.231.25.173 | 5-Jul-05/1:48 PM | Reply
Every time I read some Kierkegaard, or go farther back to Augustine or Origen I realize we've been devolving for thousands of years...

what's sad about your poem is that I have the radio on, the t.v. on and I'm posting this on the internet. I'm a flippin' trainwreck!!
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