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A World At War (Free verse) by Damien
As I silently sit I think whose war is this
As a violent bomb hits I see within the mistâ¦
A broken down child praying for death
1 leg on his chest as the medics do the rest
Dead bodies around him take to the sky
While innocent people are scarred for life
Immense negative vibes and frantic attitudes
700 disturbed, millions confused
Terrorists amused, planning the next act
The public abused for our leaders attacks
While they rest safely wallowing in safety
Completely untouched with pay slips daily
The truth we lack is backfiring upon us
We blindly believe, in government we trust
If there is absence of hope then freedom is lost
So I hope we forget these paths weâve crossed
A world gone mad, a world at war
How long will this continue for
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Weighted score: 4.6662316
Overall Rank: 12252
Posted: July 8, 2005 4:17 AM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2005 4:17 AM PDT
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