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The Edge Of The World (Prose Poem) by kingfisher
A cold morning in the 60's. I walked up the modest hill
to elementary school. Our class was middle class. My
favorite time of day was recess...and lunch. We were set
free to fly the concrete ramp as fast as we could to get
to our Olympus, the playground, which was larger than
the campus. We played German dodgeball on asphalt
and shot marbles in the gutter that ran around the peri-
meter of the chain-link fence. In the corner was an open
drain that usually had at least one orange potato bug to
squash. But the most numinous sight to be seen on that
mostly grassy rectangle was the surrounding fog that
semed to stop dead at our hill-top fantasyland. We
imagined that this was the end of the globe. To climb
off would be to disappear into oblivion. So we stayed
on our earthbound spaceship, running all over single
digit years, until our metanoia made us never return.
We sought new worlds to experience, each age beating
us in a different way, causing individual deaths. Child,
teen, adult lives from which some would inevitably
escape. Hordes of us remaining blessedly remembering
decades of ecstasy at being able to pass the next level.
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Posted: June 25, 2005 5:49 AM PDT; Last modified: June 25, 2005 5:49 AM PDT
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