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20 most recent comments by Bluemonkey (21-40)

regarding some deleted poem... 24-May-05/10:33 AM
Not great, but saved by the ending.
Re: Ungrateful by Damien_ 24-May-05/10:45 AM
"I am Ungrateful,
Ungratefully....

That's simply fucking awful, man.
Re: Perfect place by gothiclovepoetiss 13-Jun-05/6:55 AM
Not very goth...try rewriting it with different words..and a different theme...and change the title...that would make it better in my opinion.
Re: I want you by nicole081083 13-Jun-05/6:57 AM
Write this from the point of view of a Rwandan refugee and you've got something.
Re: Mr. Campbell's final journey by jroday 14-Jun-05/10:45 AM
feet are bare, not bear....unless maybe they're really hairy, in which case you might try something like Hobbit feet.

So, this guy did something bad enough to get the chair for it and he's going to heaven...I'll never understand Christianity..you get to do whatever you want to do, and as long as you say you're sorry, you still get to go to heaven. YAHOO
Re: Books by sacred_poet_me 14-Jun-05/10:49 AM
This has been said much better on those posters at the local library that say "Reading Is Super".
Re: Beach Volleyball by lil_evil_boi 14-Jun-05/10:52 AM
If you're any older that 7 or 8, this is terrible.
regarding some deleted poem... 16-Jun-05/10:59 AM
First off, as someone who is sitting in a cubicle at this very moment, I can tell you that the world is not, in fact, a cubicle. Also, the Earth is round and therefore by very definition cannot be a cubicle. So, that part doesn't make any sense.

Second, you rant and rave and basically tell me that I'm an idiot and that you are the most advanced human being on the planet? That's an out of control ego right there, chief.
Re: Eternal Pain by lil_evil_boi 22-Jun-05/8:52 AM
Assignment: Read this to whoever it's for. If you get all the way through it without them A) Shooting themselves or B) shooting you, I'll give you a 10.
Re: My Little Africa (edit) by Nuit 5-Jul-05/8:49 AM
I love how you left the misspelling in to illustrate the lack of education in Africa. That's great.
regarding some deleted poem... 6-Jul-05/8:09 AM
I'm not much for puns and I have my doubts about whether you came up with these, but i'm gonna give you a 4 just for "anal flossing".
Re: Last Vein by wilco 6-Jul-05/8:09 AM
Are you actually going to play this one? or just let it sit there?
Re: Close to my Heart by Chelsio 6-Jul-05/8:12 AM
Ok, this is not great, but for 13 years old I'll say it's not bad.
Re: I Need Not be Told by Chelsio 6-Jul-05/8:13 AM
better than your other one, I'll give you that.
Re: Because to Live I Must by TLRufener 6-Jul-05/8:14 AM
A trip to Salem, you must take.
Re: Born and Fed by Dovina 6-Jul-05/8:17 AM
Quite frankly, it's just boring.
Re: Promise Me by Taco 6-Jul-05/8:19 AM
bleeech.
Re: Our Soldiers by Lenore 6-Jul-05/8:22 AM
Actually, I think this isn't bad. Don't like the last line, but whatever.
Re: A Place by Celtic 6-Jul-05/8:25 AM
Not big on Leprechauns and Pixies.
Re: Mother Earth by TLRufener 6-Jul-05/8:26 AM
Lose everything but this:

Mother Earth
Has gone to sleep.
Lamenting, the wind
Wails and weeps.


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