Close to my Heart

Member since 2005 · Posted 5 Jul 2005 · 2 comments

Your eyes glisten just like the stars in space, My heart melts whenever I see your face. Your smile gleams like the morning sun, That would lighten the deepest, darkest dungeon. Iâm always warm on the coldest day, You always take my breath away. When Iâm sad and feeling blue, All I have to do is imagine you. I may think that we are meant to be, But I fear that you will never love me. I will have to be satisfied with just being a friend, Though my love for you will never end. I will always keep you close to my heart, Even after the day that we must part.

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3 votes so far. Yours would make 4.3 votes so far

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[2] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 6-Jul-05/1:26 AM Reply

I would like to encourage you to keep writing poems.

[5] Bluemonkey 6-Jul-05/8:12 AM Reply

Ok, this is not great, but for 13 years old I'll say it's not bad.