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Close to my Heart (Free verse) by Chelsio
Your eyes glisten just like the stars in space, My heart melts whenever I see your face. Your smile gleams like the morning sun, That would lighten the deepest, darkest dungeon. I’m always warm on the coldest day, You always take my breath away. When I’m sad and feeling blue, All I have to do is imagine you. I may think that we are meant to be, But I fear that you will never love me. I will have to be satisfied with just being a friend, Though my love for you will never end. I will always keep you close to my heart, Even after the day that we must part.

Down the ladder: Ron West

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12150
Posted: July 5, 2005 2:01 PM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2005 2:01 PM PDT
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Comments:
[2] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 71.130.9.187 | 6-Jul-05/1:26 AM | Reply
I would like to encourage you to keep writing poems.
[5] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.99 | 6-Jul-05/8:12 AM | Reply
Ok, this is not great, but for 13 years old I'll say it's not bad.
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