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You should not judge Until after death (Other) by Prince of Void
You should not judge Your happiness might be your penis The emptiness, nothingness it’s me I’m the owner of void on darkness’s edge Just never ending paces of mourning for the life And life seems desert so quest is only death What my lines are in this fatal misery The lines crossed the mystery Of what’s inside universal mind Of what’s in seven skies Of what’s in Caesar's hand, and Plato's brain, Of what's Lord Christ's heart, and Shakespeare’s strain Of what’s in sun when it dawns to man Of what’s on the spell of moon Of what’s within secretive absence of the beloved Of what’s in Rumi’s Silence mysterious silence and love Of what’s in numberless births of stars in constellations

Up the ladder: inadequate
Down the ladder: Road of Means

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12176
Posted: February 25, 2007 6:54 AM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2007 6:54 AM PST
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[6] Dovina @ 208.127.90.101 | 26-Feb-07/10:51 PM | Reply
I've stopped trying to shed a little optimism in your "lines in this fatal misery." Carry on.
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