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Eternal Pain (Free verse) by lil_evil_boi
Thinking of you
Can be a burden,
A heavy backpack
On my tired shoulders.
Being with you,
Can feel like
Paradise in heaven,
Or
Hell like I've been
Cursed.
Sometimes I grieve
To just say hi to you,
Yet I canât continue the conversation,
My mouth opens,
no sound comes out.
As your footsteps
Echo in the hallway,
Pictures of the past
Go through my mind.
Do you still feel the same?
Have you erased our history together?
Our unforgettable memories?
The obstacles, challenges
We overcame as one?
Or have you forgotten about me,
And left me hanging in the dark?
Seems like yesterday,
When we were more than friends,
Always talked about
Nothing could destroy us,
How you were
The One.
What happened to the couple,
That nothing could
Separate them?
Is there hope left?
Is there a light at the end of the tunnel?
Do you see a future with me?
Or has your heart replaced me
With someone else?
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Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12515
Posted: June 21, 2005 4:31 PM PDT; Last modified: June 21, 2005 4:31 PM PDT
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